Caroline,Final idea very good but too much text and you need a straight margin for tour dates.Image of artist is very good but slim down text which looks a bit messy.
Caroline the emphasis on your magazine advert is the release of the digipak. Tour dates aren't necessary and clutter up your ad. Could you sort this out asap.
Caroline,
ReplyDeleteFinal idea very good but too much text and you need a straight margin for tour dates.
Image of artist is very good but slim down text which looks a bit messy.
Caroline the emphasis on your magazine advert is the release of the digipak. Tour dates aren't necessary and clutter up your ad. Could you sort this out asap.
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